{"id":97832,"date":"2022-02-18T04:07:23","date_gmt":"2022-02-18T04:07:23","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.sawriterscollege.co.za\/?p=97832"},"modified":"2026-05-20T23:19:04","modified_gmt":"2026-05-20T23:19:04","slug":"6-effective-ways-to-improve-word-choice-in-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.sawriterscollege.co.za\/6-effective-ways-to-improve-word-choice-in-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"6\u00a0 Effective Ways to Improve Word Choice in Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"\n
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Here are six tips to strengthen your writing through your word choice.<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
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By Veselina Yaneva<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Words are the building blocks of a text. The freedom of word choice is one of the most inspiring aspects of writing, but it is also one of its greatest challenges.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

As Mark Twain pointed out, \u2018[t]he difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug\u2019.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The following six strategies can come in handy if you are trying to formulate your message effectively.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Write with your target audience in mind<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

Your words need to be intelligible, appropriate and emotionally appealing to your intended readership. Are you writing for an academic audience who will be impressed by a formal style and Latinate words? Will sophisticated words like \u2018extemporaneous\u2019 or \u2018exacerbate\u2019 appeal to them?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Or are you writing young adult fiction aimed at a 21st-century teenager? They might not appreciate a word such as \u2018wonder-wench\u2019 (a synonym for \u2018sweetheart\u2019), because this word is not part of a contemporary teen\u2019s vocabulary.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Select words that help conjure emotions<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

In addition to being suitable and understandable, your words also need to tap into the emotions of your readers. Emotional trigger words<\/a>, also known as power words, can help.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

For example, the word \u2018secret\u2019 piques curiosity, while the word \u2018because\u2019 promises to quench people\u2019s longing for a solution to a problem. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Consider the feelings and associations attached to a word. If you want to evoke sympathy, the word \u2018abandoned\u2019 will be more evocative than \u2018left\u2019.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Choose words with the appropriate connotations<\/a>  in your writing<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

The cultural and emotional meaning implied by a word in addition to its literal meaning (or its denotation<\/a>), is a significant part of word choice. Connotations enable authors to skew the meaning in a particular direction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

For instance, the sentences, \u2018Welcome to my house\u2019 and \u2018Welcome to my home,\u2019 carry different emotional undertones. The word \u2018house\u2019 has a neutral connotation; it simply denotes the place where we live. In contrast, the word \u2018home\u2019 induces feelings of family love and harmony.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The emotional flavours of these two words are juxtaposed in Louisa May Alcott\u2019s novel Little Women<\/em>, when Mrs March says that she doesn\u2019t want her daughters to \u2018have splendid houses, which are not homes because love is wanting\u2019. A house, be it splendid, is merely a structure, whereas a home is a place where the heart belongs.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Be careful when using the thesaurus<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

Contrast the emotional nuances of two synonyms in the following sentences:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u2018The whole team is infatuated<\/em> with the new coach.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u2018The whole team is obsessed<\/em> with the new coach.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Although the adjectives \u2018infatuated\u2019 and \u2018obsessed\u2019 are synonyms, the former conjures a favourable emotional response, while the latter evokes a slightly negative reaction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Similarly, the synonyms pairs \u2018slender\u2019 and \u2018skinny\u2019, \u2018studious\u2019 and \u2018nerdy\u2019, \u2018pushy\u2019 and \u2018ambitious\u2019 have different shades of meaning attached to them. Compare the following two sentences:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

 \u2018The new student was slender<\/em>, studious<\/em>, and ambitious<\/em>.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

 \u2018The new student was skinny<\/em>, nerdy<\/em>, and pushy<\/em>.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The first sentence creates a positive impression of the new student, whereas the second carries a negative impression.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Choose specific, concrete words to create images<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

Veteran US journalist Peter Roy Clark advises: \u2018Dig for the concrete and specific: the name of the dog.\u2019 We can follow this tip literally. Does the following sentence create vivid images in our minds?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u2018The dog curled up cosily in her favourite place.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Not really. With the help of specific nouns, however, we can \u2018see\u2019 the picture better:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u2018Whitey, a Maltese poodle, curled up cosily on her favourite doggy bed\u2019.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

In the same way, see how replacing a boring verb with a specific one and dropping the adverb can add vitality to our writing and reduce the wordiness:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

      \u2018Martin looked furiously at his enemies.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

      \u2018Martin glared at his enemies.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Enhance your writing by avoiding clich\u00e9s<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

The French poet G\u00e9rard de Nerval once said, \u201cThe first man who compared a woman to a rose was a poet, the second, an imbecile.\u201d Indeed, overused expressions often weaken your message.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Impress the readers with your originality. Think about what a clich\u00e9 means and try to rephrase it. Consider the following sentence:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

When Jessica was about to deliver her first speech, she stared<\/em> at the audience like a deer in the headlights<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

How could you<\/em> rephrase the clich\u00e9 in your unique voice and style?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Implementing these six guidelines will help you evoke the right images and emotions in the reader\u2019s mind. Even though wise vocabulary selection is not a guarantee for creating a masterpiece, it is definitely a step in the right direction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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About the Author<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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Veselina Yaneva<\/strong> is a freelance journalist with a Master\u2019s degree in English literature from Canterbury Christ Church University, UK. Her interest in writing inspired her to embark on the Freelance Journalism for Magazines and Webzines Course at the UK Writers’ College. After completing this course with distinction, she\u2019s been relishing the opportunity to immerse herself in the inspiring world of website publication as a journalism intern at the Writers College Times. Veselina\u2019s education, voracious appetite for travel and genuine love for reading, bring a range of perspectives and ideas to her work.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You can connect with Veselina via: www.linkedin.com\/in\/veselina-yaneva-83213b210<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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